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December 23, 2012
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS REBEL T1i
Shutter Speed
1/160 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
140 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Aug 30, 2012, 6:54:42 AM
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Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
Sensor Size
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Balloons Balloons by ShawnHenry Balloons Balloons by ShawnHenry
Hot air Balloons
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A bunch of balloons on the horizon with the light of the end of the day, what a pleasing vision.

Is it original... Well it's not common for sure, but original, well not really, it's a nice photography.

The photography technique is good as far I can see, the exposure is good, as well as the focus.

Ok for me the first and major problem is the framing, you have half of your picture with the sky with absolutely nothing in it. This decrease the impact of your picture in a dramatic way, I suggest to crop the picture and focus on the balloons.
The foreground has a second problem, of course you need it, it gives a sense of scale and distance without speaking of contrast. But do we really need the wires and the pole ? I you have a software like photoshop I suggest to properly erase them.

You have a very base with this photography, you just need to release its full potential.
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emizael Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
Awsome!
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ShawnHenry Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks
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MsSilith Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
pretty :heart:
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ShawnHenry Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you. I wish hadn't been so hazy that morning.
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